by Brittney Follett Apr 2, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
In the back of the room, on top of a shelf, sits a box of many colors. |
by Michelle18
Wow...this poem is really good... i love the fact that its long and you really took the time to make this poem perfect... |
The poem is fantastic. However, below are my suggestions. |
by Danielle
I love your form. it makes this all the better. |
by Danielle
I love your form. it makes this all the better. |
Very powerful from the beginning to the end. The first stanza caught my attention and held it through every amazing line. I like the message of the whole poem, truly deep and thoughtful. |