Very powerful from the beginning to the end. The first stanza caught my attention and held it through every amazing line. I like the message of the whole poem, truly deep and thoughtful.
Your choice of words seem excellent in every stanza and your descriptions brought me to some other world. I like the whole idea for this piece and I think that you portrayed everything fantastically. Very original poem, filled with vivid imagery and interesting, profound lines.
I like the lines in the brackets, too, you created very effective flow with them.
Greatly done!
5/5 from me

I love your form. it makes this all the better.
keep up the wonderful writting.

I love your form. it makes this all the better.
keep up the wonderful writting.

The poem is fantastic. However, below are my suggestions.
Stanza 01:
I feel the B part of the second line could be something like this in order to make it more poetic and rhyme with others "and a different story each tells". I really like the description it's quite true that life is full of different stories.
Stanza 02:
I feel using "The pink..." which commonly represents love might be better than white which commonly represents lack, snow, ice, peace, nothing, frost, and air. The rest is very ok. Thanks.

Wow...this poem is really good... i love the fact that its long and you really took the time to make this poem perfect...

you had my attention from beginning to end.. and i can see exactly why this was a poem the won..its flawless.

good job. 5/5