Comments : Untitled [[ Passionate Kisses ]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara

    Aww that was really cutee :) good job, keep up the good work. i liked how easy it was for me to see everything while reading this poem. great emotion too, some parts could be worked on like the wording at the end but it was a great read. but still 5/5 from me

  • 14 years ago

    by DoRk

    Great poem i can picture this happening u have some spelling mistakes though