This is a very good poem. From someone who has been there and done that... you have nice words to relate to in there. Great job! 5/5

Well...i was hesitant to read because of the category...i don't prefer reading such..sorry...well poems are emo...i mean holds a lot of emotions..liked the flow
keep writing
Pooja

This is really good!
like woah dude!
woah!

I like the style you write in its really good and i would write like that but it doesnt go natural 4 me but ur a natural at it.great poem

Good
i liked it
especaly the ending 5/5

Cutting wirst again?? Ohhh... I can faint if I keep reading your poem.. lol
You just change mr razor with mr knife... lol
Just like the other one,,, this one's also strong and powerful.. Nice and neat..
I like your poems...
I hope you keep writing..
Keep up the good work..
5/5

Hmmmmm
a masterpiece after a long time....
without issues d expressions were rilli amazin
n i rilli luvd it
quiet truly picturised the whole story
keep goin
may god bless

I liked the words used and the structure of the poem although i am not into dark poems...However, the vivid image and emotion were portrayed strongly in the whole poem..I can say this will be a good poem to start..Good luck and keep writing..5/5

Great rhyming and not to mention great poem.
this can be use as a song..:)
yeah, i love it! 5/5

I never really thought I would like those kind of poems-bcz I find them kinda emo- until I saw yours. They're really nice, the way you describe them. But it's also sad. If you knw it's a sin like you said in the poem,then dnt..stop cutting yourself. Live your life nd be grateful for it. I'm sure it's not that bad. & even if it is,no matter how bad it is,you should still thank God for it. You're gona die anyway, so why kill yourself nd make it your sin. Well..Sry for the lecture :P.

I give it a 5/5. nice job. really excellent. :)

Nice.. great job.. liked what you diid.. keep it up!!..

I'm not that fan of cutting poems and i don't like how you repeat bleed bleed bleed in almost every line. but i loved some things in this poem.
the first stanza is kinda demonic, good way to create a special atmosphere for the poem
"You are one of my best friends Mr. Knife" <-- don't like the message but wording is eye-catching

Ohh this is beautiful!! :)

Its really good you really are an excellent writer and i can really relate to your poems

Nice work keep at it so i can read more from you

Mmm, It started out well but it kinda just petered out at the end, if you know what I mean. Overall it was good. Keep it up and let me know when you put up more.

This poem was very descriptive, And gave a lot of imagery which made it a whole lot better. The rhyme scheme is also very good, this made the poem flow exactly from one word to the next perfectly.

Another nice poem!
Lots of gd imagery and good rhymes
I can relate to lots of your poems and i can reali feel the emotion you put into it.

=)