Hey Erin!,
Havin't got on here in awhile.

this is very deep poem,

I have had a simaler experiance. a best friend betrays you, for the one you loved.

Friends will stab you in every which way then can, along with boyfriends or girl friends.
that's why true friends are so hard to come across.
That's just life though, as harsh as it can be.

only thing I would fix

"whole" should be "hole"

anyway talk to me on MSN sometime, I miss chatting with you.

Take care Erin.

Hey i like it. this is something that happens to every1 nearly, so its realli good.
xx