Comments : Innocence

  • 16 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    I like this one alot!
    the terrible trials of decisions that we all must face.... Amazing poem!
    Good Job!

    XxAshleyxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Anthony

    Wow i liked this poem! 7/5 great job dude. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    What a wonderful theme, many can rhyme but structure and a message behind it all seems to make one peice much more interesting than the next, well done