Comments : When the Cock crows

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Nice work xx

  • 8 years ago

    by Maher

    Funny enough, as I read this, one was crowing just down the street from me. He's a little early being that it's 1am. Must be one of those hipster roosters.

    To the point though: a very good write. Aside from a few punctuation tweaks, it reads well. It's short, sweet and has a good amount of imagery without being over done.

    Real nice :)