All That's Left Is An Empty Shell #2

by Amerasian   Apr 2, 2008


All that’s left is an empty shell.
You have taken from me,
All that is important.
The most important to me,
Your love.
Along with my heart,
I felt my soul leaving me.
Being called away.
Slipping away as if a prisoner is leaving its prison.
Am I not worthy of living?
Did you try to steal my breath too?
Did you want to kill me,
Slowly and painfully?

I wrote 2 versions to this poem. They both start with the same line. One talkes about suicide the other is about being empty. (without a heart or a soul)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats quite a good style hun, good writing xx