I love it very nicely done... And i hate when people do this but i think if you take out old at the end it will sound better... But its your poem its amazing good job 5/5

Sarah,

soem people do this, I know and you have made a good poem about it. I hope it's not about you, but I don't think it is:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

To me this is not only a 6 min poem, but an excellent poem...

i love how you rhymed the last word of each line.

The flow of the poem, makes a reader to keep on reading, the way you used your words was really good...

and no one would have expected it was a bad old dream in the end...

very well written...
keep it up always.

This is short but very nice, i really like the title, well thought of. Good work keep it up

For some reason I really liked this. I can't quite put my finger on i, but there's a unique aura I sense, partially because of the imagery.