Underneath the debris

This is an absolutely beautiful piece, Ingrid. I can't stop reading it... you truly outdid yourself in this one. Kudos. 5/5

Your faith and optimism are uplifting. Nothing but nothing is permanent, war, famine, disease all pass. A beautiful poem of hope.

A very inspiring poem. It gives a message throughout the world.

ِThe last stanza was really moving.

The only word we could trust is 'Hope'

Great write!
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Best wishes,

Sarah A.

Ingrid
This is a very deep thought provoking poem.

Underneath the debris
the soft grass perseveres,
refusing to die and
succumb to destruction.

I love this stanza. It shows life still goes on. Fighting to still stand.

For men can kill
each other,
but will never
wipe out
hope.

I love the ending stanza Ingrid. Hope and faith are so strong inside our hearts. No one can take that away.
Excellent!
Love Cindy

Ingrid your words have woven a piece that holds such a deep impacting message within it's lines.

For men can kill
each other,
but will never
wipe out
hope
^^^
This ending is magnificent! No matter the magnitude of disaster created, the one thing that will out stand all .... is hope!

Your ink has inscribed a deep message within the mind & heart of this reader, well done Ingrid!

Luanne