Comments : Love Cannot Live in my Damaged Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    I think one of the great things about poems is that some of them can't be understood, its just like how sometimes you don't understand your own emotions and maybe this poem just reflects that. i like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Niinaa

    Only the screen could tell this splintered tale,
    Of passion sprinkled with lust, intoxicating -
    Daze blurred my thoughts of alcoholic lips
    Love, warmth, security, needing, advocating.
    ^ Love This Stanza

    This is a great poem i love the emotion shown in this piece it is very strong Your Work Is Amazing Keep On Writing

    5/5