Awww the words you used here are soo sweet and the whole piece flows really well. i liked it a lot!!!!!
5/5 from me!!!!!
ali xxx

What i liked most of this poem is the easiness of your expression. And that's why the poem flows so very well. A very swift poem. Good write!

Awww great poem i especially liked the third stanza= ) 5/5

Cory