Damb thats sum real shit i like it i hope to read more like it |
by Sharr
Did This Realyy Happen? |
Lol U just like making ppl wait huh? lol This was really hot. And I even thought that the flow was pretty good. I was like picturing it all in my head when I was reading it. Towards the end is when it started 2 get hotter so I'm assuming that part 3 is going 2 be really hot huh? It was really good. 5/5 Message me when part 3 comes ok. =) I wrote a new poem and I was wondering if u could read it. I think that u would like it. It's called Our Ecstasy. But it's a guy and girl but I think that u would still like it since ur bi. Please and thank u =) |
by ericka
Omg ur killing me u keep stopping at the good parts. anyway part 1 was hot bt this was way hotter. can't wait for part 3 |
by cooper
Number three plzzz |
by cooper
Number three plzzz |
by maria
Wen is 3out w/b |
Wow i loved it |
Wow i loved it |
Read both of these poems. very well written. the innocence and sensuality of two women exploring their bdies...mmm well i know it sounds wrong but when i read poems with such intensity and passion i just can't help myself...lol great poem. flows beautifully |
Dude i read the first and now the second n i agree wit some of these ppl dont stop it u stop it at the good parts |