Comments : My Female Lover (part2)

  • 16 years ago

    by brittany payne

    Damb thats sum real shit i like it i hope to read more like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharr

    Did This Realyy Happen?

    And When You Writting The Rest.

  • 16 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    Lol U just like making ppl wait huh? lol This was really hot. And I even thought that the flow was pretty good. I was like picturing it all in my head when I was reading it. Towards the end is when it started 2 get hotter so I'm assuming that part 3 is going 2 be really hot huh? It was really good. 5/5 Message me when part 3 comes ok. =) I wrote a new poem and I was wondering if u could read it. I think that u would like it. It's called Our Ecstasy. But it's a guy and girl but I think that u would still like it since ur bi. Please and thank u =)

  • 16 years ago

    by ericka

    Omg ur killing me u keep stopping at the good parts. anyway part 1 was hot bt this was way hotter. can't wait for part 3

  • 16 years ago

    by cooper

    Number three plzzz

  • 16 years ago

    by cooper

    Number three plzzz

  • 16 years ago

    by maria

    Wen is 3out w/b

  • 16 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    Wow i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by angela cisneros

    Wow i loved it

  • Read both of these poems. very well written. the innocence and sensuality of two women exploring their bdies...mmm well i know it sounds wrong but when i read poems with such intensity and passion i just can't help myself...lol great poem. flows beautifully
    **ADA**
    **aBSwaBHiaPL**
    P.S. no i'm not bi or lesbian, but i did experiment...^-^

  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    Dude i read the first and now the second n i agree wit some of these ppl dont stop it u stop it at the good parts