MISTRESS

Enjoyed your write greatly, thought it told the description well of this woman. My only suggestion would be to use the line "Only the heart of a man in passion" as a stand alone between the two stanzas.
As alwasy an opinion. Very nice write.

It was cool. It makes me think of those poetry clubs you see on T.V. where the lighting is dim, everyone loves coffee for whatever reason, a drum beats at the end of each line, and applause comes in the form of snapping. I'd give it a four.

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