This is a true story, so it would mean alot to me if you commented. Thank you

Wow extremely awsome poem, very sad, it was writtin so well to, it all flowed perfectly of my lips, it what i look for in a poem, and what i like to make my poems do, well well done

wow great poem, very much enjoyed it.....thanks for sharing a bit of your world with us!!!!

I really liked your poem. I found it easy to relate to. Keep writing, you're talented!

wow...really heartfelt, i enjoyed it

Hey,
That was really good u have quite a talent! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! that also once happend to me! I feel real bad because i no the feeling!
love
Amanda

I hope you feel better uz i'm going through the samething, but with a guy. It touched me.Keep writing never stop.

I can very much relate with this poem....it was very well written please come and take a look at some of my poems and tell me what you think of them Thanks! keep writing!

i loved it! i know it hurts to relive expeirencees but once you get them out on paper (or computer) its worth it and it gets some of the anger out! she didnt deserve you! keep your head high becuase u kick butt at poetry and all she can do is hurt people!
lexi lou

Thank you everyone for your comments. I hope you will read my poem "I Forgive You". It fills in alot of stuff that nobody knew, until now. And Again, Thank you. I would never have been here if it wasn't for everyone reading my poems.

great poem. alot of people like this one. lol. keep on writing and believing in yourself. your very good.

Ashley

Wow!!! That is such a TERRIFIC poem!! I love it A LOT! I know that EXACT feeling! I'm so sorry!! I'm gonna read all your poems, you have lots of talent!!!! Wonderful job!!!!!

Amy

Hey...very nice poem. I haven't been writing for that long either. You seem like a cool guy. I've written lots of love poems too. Check mine out....I bet you can relate.

well, this made me actually cry.....I had this crush...and man, well too long of a story. still very good job

Talented poet! Adding you to my favorites. 5!

that was really nice...great feeling in it.

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i love your work. it's amazing

DAVID! This is an amazing way to tell a heart breaking story! I am so sorry that happened to you, and I'm sorry she can't see what all she's losing...Good luck and try to smile!

Love lost is a horrible thing, but its almost been a year since you wrote this, and judging by your other poems, you have found another, and hopefully this one will stay for good =]. Love is, to say the least an amazing thing. GREAT poem, i can tell it came from the bottom of your heart.