Nice work!

It just really scratched the surface of it and I wished you did more but let me wanting more good try Plot121

Very intense dark poem, it has very haunting atmosphere. You created truly powerful imagery in each stanza. I wish that it was longer cause I really wanted to read more. Overall, greatly written piece, it posses some simplicity that highlighted dark details in each stanza. The flow is also very good in the whole piece. You could maybe add a stanza or two, or some metaphors but overall, this is great read.
Keep up!