No More Tears Tonight----12-1-06

by Love vs Fate   Apr 2, 2008


This is yet another free verse poem I wrote one day, It's a suicide note. This was my very first poem. So there is a big difference in how I write today.

Dear Everyone,

I want you all to know,
Why I did what I am about to do.
I was ready to give up my life.
I was just so afraid.
I was depressed, In so many ways.
I just wanted it to fade away.

When I thought of ending it all, I got this feeling
deep inside. I no longer could do it.
I couldn't take my life.

years later..

As I open my eyes, I see
light for the first time.
No more darkness,
No more fears.
It's just been a couple of crazy years.
I'm surrounded by friends.
I'm surrounded by people who love me.
And to think, I almost gave that all up.

I thank you everyone in my life, You have saved me.

Sincerely,
Travis L.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Coffee Loves Nachos

    Wow... that is really emotional... I actually wanted to tear cause it is just that emotional. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    This is one of the best. Its describes it all, starts with an urge, " i was just afraid, i was so depressed in so many ways " then comes the fear part " when i thought of ending it all i got this feeling deep inside i no longer could do it ".. You then ended it perfectly implying your life is always nice, just needs you to realise it.. This is major talent. Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    I think alot of people can relate to this good job.
    5/5
    Amazing Job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Keep it up mate, great work xxxxxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by michelle

    Wow! you can feel the emotion in this. the confusion the anger the sadness. I like how you wrote a second one years later looking back on the 'crazy years'!

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