Wow! you can feel the emotion in this. the confusion the anger the sadness. I like how you wrote a second one years later looking back on the 'crazy years'!

Keep it up mate, great work xxxxxxx

I think alot of people can relate to this good job.
5/5
Amazing Job!!!

This is one of the best. Its describes it all, starts with an urge, " i was just afraid, i was so depressed in so many ways " then comes the fear part " when i thought of ending it all i got this feeling deep inside i no longer could do it ".. You then ended it perfectly implying your life is always nice, just needs you to realise it.. This is major talent. Keep it up

Wow... that is really emotional... I actually wanted to tear cause it is just that emotional. 5/5