Comments : A Happy Poem

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    YAY!!! i love your happy poems, jesse....as the world now knows! i'm just..gah. i love your poem waaaaaaaay too much.

    Can I bring myself to it?
    Write a happy poem
    Blue eyes have captured me
    Blue eyes, I feel at home

    ^ :S blurg. i wish...well, never mind...great stanza.

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Awww, see i knew u had it in u! great poem, a smile really can make everything better just 4 a few moments. i know how it feels then a wave of sadness washes right back but 4 those few moments everything is ok. that's y i always say live in the moments cause u'll never get them back. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~me~