Awwwwww dont know what to say. you just expressed so much feelings and pain, its very moving to read and very very powerful. well done xxxx

Great freaking poem i swear it was so great, i get what u are saying and it was put ina different way and i liked that.

I loved it.
wonderful Poem
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Aww.. So sad. But it is one of the best things I've read in a while. Good job.

'I ' m preparing myself to ask you the biggest question of our relationship ; My heart is beating and the perspiration is ready to fall in large drops -- All of the sudden my mouth has decided to go dry '-
the imagery is this small part is absoluetly fanatstic, you can almost put yourself in the shoes of the person in the poem. if it is you or someone else?

And till this day , I know you would never risk a decrease in your ego for me and I would still go to the farthest yard just for a little amount of your attention . . . - fabulous absoluettly fabulous.

again, i think all your poems could be a little longer but thats becaus ei like them so much. and there is that small detail on punctuation, can help an awful lot.