Aw so adorable !

My love will never fade,
Or even begin to sway,
I'll never break your heart,
Or lead you into dismay,

^^ favorite verse : ) very very cute

5/5 i know she loved it !

Aww this was soooo cute. I loved it. The whole time I just kept thinking about my bf and how our anniversary is coming up. This was so adorable. My favorite part was:

Send me a woman,
Kind hearted and true,
That was my prayer,
And he sent me you,

Each time that we talk,
A smile comes to my face,
And when I hear your voice,
My heart begins to race,

&

My love will never fade,
Or even begin to sway,
I'll never break your heart,
Or lead you into dismay,

I thought that these stanza's were soo great. I was just like smiling through out the whole poem. Everything was just so cute and perfect. I loved it all. 5/5

Not to offend TSI, but I disagree. The only problem I seen was the very last line.

Unhurled is kind of ugly though.

Amazing job, seriously Daniel. It's very sweet of you to write her a poem like this. I bet she absolutely loved it.

I see im not the only one who was blown away by:

My love will never fade,
Or even begin to sway,
I'll never break your heart,
Or lead you into dismay

OMG!!! Soooo unbelievable beautiful!
I can't even be jealous and wish someone wrote that to me, bc just reading it from you to your girl makes me happy...
never let go on someone who makes you feel like that!