Being Saved

by Tiffany   Apr 3, 2008


There used to be a girl,
who once pretended,
Thought no one noticed
so she hided.

But then one day,
A boy came around,
and pulled her up from the ground.

She looked up to him
with teared filled eyes,
and asked him "why?"

He smiled down at her,
and raised her head up,
and planted a kiss right on her head.

He said,
You are always in pain,
and then I am too,
and of course,
I love you!

She smiled at him,
with her hazel eyes
and said,
As do I.

He pulled her close
and held her tight
fore they had found their lovers
And all was right.

* This is completly different from what Im used to writing... but I thought Id try it.. so let me know what you think.. is it good.. bad.. great.. horrid?.. comment.. any critisizm welcome!!*

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