Forever love

by Abena   Apr 3, 2008


Called me his light
A star in the night
Making all his fiasco's so bright

Whispering his words I heard a voice sing
Sshh, hear it ring

Close your eyes and feel the words I write
Because I want to make it just right
With you by my side I feel able
With your soothing touch, you still me stable

Waited for your kiss
Slowly I watched it emerge into a bliss

Your soulful name sent shivers down my spine
Looked into your eyes wanted you to be mine
In my dreams I saw you just as fine

Watched you go by, feel my heart boom
Soon people will witness our love bloom

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  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I loved how it seems like, when you first read it, that you dive straight in. Hooked me at the first line. :) So relate able and the emotions feel very strong.

    Close your eyes and feel the words I write
    Because I want to make it just right
    With you by my side I feel able
    With your soothing touch, you still me stable
    ---
    Is my favorite stanza. I've found myself on one a many nights trying to pen the perfect poem for how I feel. :)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Whispering his words I heard a voice sing
    Sshh, hear it ring

    bulit this one once more to make it in proper sentence.. its nice to read your poem. its cute 5/5

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