Comments : OH GOD WHY ME?

  • 16 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    The entry ticket to this world
    Is marked with obnoxious barb
    Adversity nurses the virtue of man
    But why in such appalling garb?
    I like these lines very much.But the nature of adversity is so bitter that sometimes we can not avoid it and react in a very pathetic way.You can understand it.The description of the calamities and disasters that have been mentioned here are, no doubt, worse and more touching.A beautiful and 'spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings.'

  • 16 years ago

    by Rohit Sapra

    This poem is excellent as it talks about how cruel life can be to some as the boy who lost his parents will never be able to recover from such a setback which life gave him just when he entered this world. It is great that you wrote about such a topic.

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow this poem is so sad and so true.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    Awesome! I am contemplating an anwer to it:

    Why the flowers fade in a day?
    Why the sun sets the same day?
    Why the youth fades away so soon?
    In all these is Nature's boon.

    Why the lotus blooms for a while?
    Why beauties after a while beguile?
    Everything has its own profile,
    Nature gives everything a trial.

    Winter is always followed by spring,
    Music is mixes up low notes and zing;
    There is always a monotony in One,
    Change and diversity create all fun.

    When the sun sets in the East,
    It rises in the West,
    So that we can have the rest,
    And they have the zest.

    In that lies our lif's zest

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Last stanza is very good. It's a very true poem. Something can't be avoided. Thoughtful piece of writing.

  • 16 years ago

    by passionate baileigh

    This is amazingly good