Comments : School

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that is a great poem, a great write. i love it, sometimes i feel like that. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Awww Gabby! I loved this poem! I felt like I could relate to it in so many ways!
    "her wrists and her legs
    are canvases for her art
    upon them she scratches little things
    a picture of her broken little heart"
    This was one of my favorite stanzas btw, the first two lines really left a deep impression on me.
    Your poem flowed really well, though I think that it could have flowed better with some punctuation/capitalization in parts, but it was gorgeous anyway.
    5/5
    ~gaby

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    *hug* gabby great poem, hate the subject, but great none the less

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Aww you write so well chick xxxx