Sharing

I want to share the sunshine light,
I want to share the moon,
I want to share the evening air,
I want to share it with you soon.

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15 years ago
by Dreamofolwin

A cute write... :) Yes, you could expand on it more, Lol. but it's still good.

All the best,
Olwin.
16 years ago
by Unamed

Hmm..i think it could use some work. its too short and well, i think it needs more emotion and make it longer..its sweet an all but i would love to c this longer. ;)
Aly
16 years ago
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

Cute i loved it cery cery sweet. iloved it:)
16 years ago
by Jackie

It's a short poem, still good though, 5/5
16 years ago
by Heimerschmidt

Its a nice start to a poem, but it is very very very very short.