Its a nice start to a poem, but it is very very very very short.

It's a short poem, still good though, 5/5

Cute i loved it cery cery sweet. iloved it:)

Hmm..i think it could use some work. its too short and well, i think it needs more emotion and make it longer..its sweet an all but i would love to c this longer. ;)
Aly

A cute write... :) Yes, you could expand on it more, Lol. but it's still good.

All the best,
Olwin.