Why has no one commented yet? This is brilliant! You wrote this so well and I am so amazed! :)
"The green waves of the breeze,
Flowing across the field,
These moments make time freeze,
In a world we all keep sealed,"
You completely drew me in here, and I had to keep reading.
"My body slides across the grass,
The heavy weight lands in my glove,
My teammates cheer as they mass,
Creating that moment I love,"
Your rhyme is so great here, you were so descriptive I could imagine watching this!
Great ending, just a wonderful way to end it.
The rhyme and flow throughout this poem was terrific and you just described baseball so wonderfully. I really enjoyed reading this, so keep writing and take care!