My love for you

by xXxUNOxXx   Apr 4, 2008


You question my love, but it's really there
Without you, life I could not bare
I love you more than anything in life
Someday I want to be your loving wife

I smile because I get an e mail from you
You say I don't love you, and u ask "what do I do?"
I say I love you and u know that
Sometimes you act like such a brat

But now you know what I truly feel
Without you I just couldn't deal
You make me happy and u make me smile
the wait to see you is going to be worth while

I love you so much

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Be careful with having to rearrange your words to make it rhyme, it may be better if you just let it play out. You should try pure free verse sometime, your rhymes are good, you'd probably make great unrestrained other poetry!
    And, this poem is VERY sweet, kind of sad in a way too. Make sure you're treated properly, good though!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Is this a long distance relationship? well I've been in that relationship before. If you're in that situation now good luck.

    Anyway it was a great poem. Flow went well, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awww...nice poem, who's that about?

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Nicely put together:)

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