Comments : My love for you

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Nicely put together:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Awww...nice poem, who's that about?

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Is this a long distance relationship? well I've been in that relationship before. If you're in that situation now good luck.

    Anyway it was a great poem. Flow went well, good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Be careful with having to rearrange your words to make it rhyme, it may be better if you just let it play out. You should try pure free verse sometime, your rhymes are good, you'd probably make great unrestrained other poetry!
    And, this poem is VERY sweet, kind of sad in a way too. Make sure you're treated properly, good though!