A-D-H-D out of control!!

by Love vs Fate   Apr 4, 2008


A-Always hyper with no control.
Always cyber with a loving friend.

D-Daring to be different.
Sharing with you if your daring me to.

H-Having no confidence in thyself.
Wanting to be loved by everyone.
Having a disease that is so hard.
It wasn't just the luck of my card.

D-Don't you dare think about judging me.
Dare to judge, you better know me first.
Or I'll come after you with a deadly thirst.
So think about what you're about to do.
Don't mess with me, For I'll mess with you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    The title to this poem struck a cord with me. I have a friend who has ADHD and this poem fits him to a t. very well written great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    I liked all the emotions in this poem
    5/5
    Loved it!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by samantha

    This is good i could feel it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    OOO.. I liks.. lol.. very unique.. just lik you..^-^.. but very good..

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Oo dark man! :D At first I was thinking...Man this isn't a dark poem it's just a sad poem. Then that last line changed the whole poem. :) Pretty unique. The title seemed like it be a loopy poem but it was completely different. This is definitely higher than a four but lower than a five. I'd give it a four point five but I can't do that so I'll round it up to a five.

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