Oo dark man! :D At first I was thinking...Man this isn't a dark poem it's just a sad poem. Then that last line changed the whole poem. :) Pretty unique. The title seemed like it be a loopy poem but it was completely different. This is definitely higher than a four but lower than a five. I'd give it a four point five but I can't do that so I'll round it up to a five. |
by Tiffany
OOO.. I liks.. lol.. very unique.. just lik you..^-^.. but very good.. |
by samantha
This is good i could feel it. |
by Sammerz
I liked all the emotions in this poem |
The title to this poem struck a cord with me. I have a friend who has ADHD and this poem fits him to a t. very well written great job. |