Pretty good, man, pretty good. The R one was sort of off since it didn't rhyme like all of the others. I also didn't like you rhymed shame with blame twice...I dunno....I sort of don't mind it but at the same time I do. I think I'd have to hear someone say it to know if it fits well. Ya know what I mean?

Other than that it was pretty cool. Four.

Very nice dear friend.. likes it.. lol.. keep up the great poems!!..

That was good I liekd it!

This is rly good keep up the good work

I liked how some of this rhymed and how all that u said is oh so true
5/5
Excellent Job!!!

This is nice, i like the way you used one word and penned a brilliant piece out of it.. Good work keep it up