This is very good! It makes you think, and it gives you a nice solid message.
Writing b/c instead of because kind of takes away from the aesthetically pleasing part of the poem, instead of 'rite' (in my opinion) it should be right, just to make the poem that much more serious.
Good poem idea!

Your poetry has gotten alot better. Is it because you found your one and only. I will let you know that I am a friend and a brother that still cares. Take luck and have fun, from your big bro. AJ :-)