Comments : Love = Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    Awwww this is so sad.
    but its still super duper sick wit it awesome!
    good job :)

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow that was so wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow that was so wow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Annissha

    5/5 that poem was really good,i loved every word of it..i know how u feel but my person just didnt tell me he was gay but newayz keep doing what u do cuz u do it o so well, good job!

    much luv
    peachez

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Beautiful poem, i loved it!

    this was my fav part,
    Now I know why I didn't exist in her mind
    Half my life has been a waste of time
    Now I'm here feeling rotten
    She's just a memory I haven't forgotten

    i really like this
    keep it up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Oh wow.. what a twist at the end! nice job! i didnt see that one coming.. great poem :)