Waw perfect love poem and you got pure love inside your heart,but let me say that why you love and think it isnt work ,why we love and let go,we cant forget and we willnt but if you realy love you have to try more ,its not the best for anyone to let go but it hurt and break hearts ,i live the same as he thought if he gone a way its better for me that i deserve better,but i dont want better i just want him,if you realy love dont lose it.
and for the poem its great in flow and beautiful words you got there,all of it my favorait,keep your love and keep write.5/5

Loving singer contest comment:

good work , it is a very nice one , 1!! i like it , jsut if you can split it into paragraph 1 big paragraph is wasting the beatuty of it i think and make the reader afriad of reading and the eye tuired

Amazing.