by Bekka Smekka Apr 4, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As a before note I'd just like to say i don't really like this poem. i know that may sound weird when its your own work but whatever, it just didn't seem right. please suggest anything to make it better!! |
by Fire Catches
I don't know why you don't like this |
Err..it's good really..i don't really know why you don't like it..hhe.. |
by MELI
YES YES YES THIS IS A GREAT PPOEM I DONT KNOW WHY U DONT LIKE.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ND DONT BE SO MODEST!! LOL YAH THIS TUCHD ME AND ITS TRUE ESPECIALLY FOR ME RIGHT NOW... WHO R U TAKIN ABOUT BY THE WAY?? .. SEND A MESSAGE KK WELL IF U KUD B SO KIND =] |
by Hear You Me
I dont really know how you could make it better, if you know what i mean. you make a poem and you either tear it to pieces or make a few tweaks. i dont think you could tear it to pieces without changing it totally, and its a good poem =D |
by Jade
I think its good! |