I think its good!

I dont really know how you could make it better, if you know what i mean. you make a poem and you either tear it to pieces or make a few tweaks. i dont think you could tear it to pieces without changing it totally, and its a good poem =D

YES YES YES THIS IS A GREAT PPOEM I DONT KNOW WHY U DONT LIKE.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ND DONT BE SO MODEST!! LOL YAH THIS TUCHD ME AND ITS TRUE ESPECIALLY FOR ME RIGHT NOW... WHO R U TAKIN ABOUT BY THE WAY?? .. SEND A MESSAGE KK WELL IF U KUD B SO KIND =]

Err..it's good really..i don't really know why you don't like it..hhe..
but as for me..i thought there was something a bit off at the end..
but over all, good job. :)

I don't know why you don't like this
I like it ALOT
The way with your word and how you
put them together..it was amazing

I don't think anything needs to be changed
5/5