by Infected with His Deadly Love Apr 4, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Photographs and memories will always remain with me |
by BREEawNUHH
Aw. This is sad. I liked it, though. I felt like it was full of emotion, which is good. It also seemed really heartfelt, which is, again, good. I liked the words. However; the fourth line in the first stanza -- "your" should be "you're". :] |
by The Queen
Ouch..Beautifully done that comes from the heart although its more on sadness. I was touched and felt your words which means you wrote it amazingly. Excellent piece and Take Care xDD |
Very nice romantic free verse that flows smoothe from the heart |
by Ingrid
This poem comes right from the heart and it has a very sicere feel about it. |