I Promise You

by Absolute Broken Perfection   Apr 4, 2008


I know you have a broken soul.
I see you struggle for control.
We share two halves of a frayed heart.
Together we do fall apart.
I can't help..but here's my hand.
You need to know I understand.

My days settled to cloudy blue-
Brightened solely by you.
Only to you there are no lies
because you know why my heart cries.
I promise you I'll never leave;
Within each other we believe.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    So beauitful. very deep and heartfelt i loved every word, you have a wonderful writing style and you choose your words wisely. wonderful title also. keep up the great work. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by ameena

    Awwwww
    dis is really nice...
    u can tell u really care bout dat person
    good job

  • 16 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Really beautiful, I can really feel your emotion seeping out.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Aw cute i hope he got to read it !
    5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Miko

    Soo sweet! 5/5

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