Show me the way

by Love vs Fate   Apr 4, 2008


This is kinda like a song I wrote late last night.

NA NA NA,
ya..As I lay here
in the dark, I'm trying
to listen to the sounds
but I hear nothing, nothing to be found.

i get up and walk to my window.
Oh lord help me.
I'm losing my life, I'm losing
control. I need your help lord please
say my soul.

DA DA DA,
BA DA BA DA.
So I open my heart to you.
I'm looking for answers,
I feel so afraid. I'm just
in this parade of darkness.

So show me the way!
Show me the sign tonight.
The sign that I want to see,
I need your so bad
before I get sad.

*Repeat*

Na Na Na,
ya...As I lay here in the dark,
I'm trying to listen to the sounds,
But there is nothing to be found.

You've opened my eyes oh lord.
I try to see but I am in a bind.
I'm lost and confused in this mind.

So I pray, Oh lord I pray.
Save my soul...Tonight.

I really hope you all like this song.
I was really down last night and so I asked god for
help. I just started to write and write.
If you don't like this song, please do feel free
to rate it bad or good and also leave a short or long comment, that is up to you. But I do pray for all of you
out there who are having a hard time in life. God will help you for he has helped me. I pray for you all.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Im not really religious but it eases everyone i think to ask for help from someone...i think theres a god everywhere even w.o a religion you know..god in each of us or something : )...anyway great poem im sorry you were down tho : c

    *^*crow*^*

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Wow am impressed, " i open my heart to you, i am looking for answers, i feel so afraid, i am just in this parade of darkness show me the way " this really caught my eye, i remember making such a prayer when i was lost in sin.. Really nice, good work and hope all goes well for You.. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew

    Wow am impressed, " i open my heart to you, i am looking for answers, i feel so afraid, i am just in this parade of darkness show me the way " this really caught my eye, i remember making such a prayer when i was lost in sin.. Really nice, good work and hope all goes well for You.. Keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    Loved the song Travis....sorry you have been sad lately hope things will get better for you but ur strong and you'll make it through it.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    I loved your song Travis!!!!... Im srry you were sad.. It can get really hard in life.. nd praying to god.. can be your only salvation sometimes.. nd I pray too.. cuz life isnt alway far.. But it makes us so much stronger.. ^-^

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