by Dark Secrets Apr 4, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
In my dreams you always appear |
by Tara Kay
The rhyming seemed slightly forced on each line at the end of the stanza's, but overall it flowed really well, and I liked the imagery you portrayedn with the descriptions and words, a really lovely poem with a hint of sadness and longing. |
by Heba
More than fantastic, i like it, you don't show me these emotions at school zahra?! |
Really cool poem! I loved how you made it all rhyme. Please check out some of my poems if you can. Take care! |
by Ingrid
Hi Zahra, |