Hi Zahra,

Your man sounds really comforting to me!
Very creative love poem by you!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Really cool poem! I loved how you made it all rhyme. Please check out some of my poems if you can. Take care!

More than fantastic, i like it, you don't show me these emotions at school zahra?!

The rhyming seemed slightly forced on each line at the end of the stanza's, but overall it flowed really well, and I liked the imagery you portrayedn with the descriptions and words, a really lovely poem with a hint of sadness and longing.

Love
Tara
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