Comments : Teacher

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Unbelievable! A very prevailing poem, it holds so much intensity.

    ~that someday he might have enough
    of his job,his rep, his life
    that he might admit he never loved
    his boring, aging wife~
    ^^^^^^
    This stanza was amusing it made me giggle a little.

    Keep writing! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah A.