The Diffrence between Love and Lust

by LiisaMariie143   Apr 4, 2008


The difference between love and lust.
In love, there is a little more trust.
Lust you don't really know if its true.
& in Love, you shouldn't ever be blue.
When your in love it is such a deep connection.
you look in the water and see both of your reflections.
theres no jealousy running through your veins.
and you don't ever have to pull in the reins.
Your in love, when u cant stop thinking about that person.
you have passionate moments that run through your head.
&& u don't have to worry about being lead.
Lust you don't really know.
if its real or if its just a foe.
&& that feeling you get when your in love,
its something that has to be sent from above.
so the difference between love and lust.
is something your hearts gotta trust.

(i wrote this one for a poem contest) =]=]=]

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  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Your poem definitely described the differences between love and lust. It was all oh so true, but I felt it was a little forced like you just put certain words in there just so it would rhyme. If you're feeling stressed about rhymes I suggest just writing free verse. It's much easier. I also think that instead of putting "&" you should write out "and" it just looks more neat and professional.

    It was pretty good.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by courtney

    Its good and verry true
    ~courtney~

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I like your poems because they are showing your heart in each line and they aren't long and drawn out to infinity like so many others I read. some of mine can fall into that catagory too I'm afraid. Sometimes it's hard to stop and just let the words stop. keep writing and we'll keep reading

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