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by StandStill Apr 4, 2008 category : Miscellaneous / Misc. poems
Eyes open Darkness all around little animal noises quite night time sounds Look around and what does she see? Nothing. Black. Perma-night is reality Dirt all around making a wall burried alive with no one to call nobody to save her and she's suffocating twisting around panic is approaching clawed fingernails scraping and scared she needs to get out. now open her eyes..why had she dared? she's screaming but there's nobody around save me! save me! six feet underground sweat beads her forehead she needs to find a way out right now, before she dies all that's left is rabid doubt she's giving up there's not a chance of escape there's no way out no light, no sound, no shape and suddenly there it is a pinprick of light she screams louder than ever she's not giving up this fight her throat is raw and her eyes hurt but sunshine and hope are now breaking through the dirt a fresh gulp of air and a friendly smile she embraces him her rescuer full of guile And every night now she will thank God for sending her a boy to help her death be dodged*you know who you are*
by Boy
Beautifully written. i loved the poem.
by Stephanie
Wow!!! that was really good....I liked it a lot.... keep writing...your really good!!!!