Awwww this was so sweet and cute

Wow really good song....I loved reading it!

It was okay, but as I said before, I'm not a fan of reading songs. I like to listen to songs and read poems, with no mixing in between. Having said that, I did like some of these parts, like

'All you have to do
Is please say yes to me'

and

'You re amazing beyond belief
More than you ll ever know'

Brad

Hey nicely done. do you have any tune actreally writen for it? it would sound really good. 5/5

WOW let me know if she says yes..this is amazing..

Aaaw I thought this was so sweet :)

Captures the essence of love I thought.

Have to say my favourite line was:
"So I'm putting my love to the test" simply because we have to take risks for love rather than be too afraid to try.

Great write!
xxx

Aw! Loved it! Very sweet.

This is cute!

I can't wait tell it cames out. the "if" pull the song a up a noch:)

I love this i hope everything works out for you, by the way great rhyming

YES!!! Awww I like it!! Its really sweet and I hope that girl says yes... If she doesn't then she on crack!!!

I love it, its really really good!!! I told you, you were the greatest!!! 10/5