Ode To Spring (Collab RTVW)

by Cindy   Apr 5, 2008


Ode To Spring (collab RTVW)

Grass turning shades of green
Since frost of winters gone
Bees Buzzing merrily
Whistling a springtime song

Birds are singing sweetly
Children playing so well
Lambs are now for bleating
As they skip along the dell

Daffodils are blooming
Painting natures canvas
Frogs jump from lily pads
Above a great abyss

Lilac scents April's breeze
Basking in sun's warm rays
Lovers walking hands laced
Enjoying springs display

Butterflies, dragonflies
Dance so quickly by
Boats a sail on the lake
Welcoming clear blue sky

Buttercups and daisies
carpeting meadows green
apple blossom fills the air
breath in this perfect scene

Unlike the chilling winter
Spring has now left it's glow
Upon the earth a melody
Set in a sunny show.

Written By: Cindy, Frank, Dixiedaisy, Rachel, Hellon & Twisted Heart
April 4, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    I felt as if I was reading a poem from Wordsworth.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It was fun as the add a stanza club collabs always are. It is a joy to be surrounded with such wonderful and talented people. As Luanne would say, Woot Woot!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!
    ^^^
    Sorry I meant 6 ... my bad oops ... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The words you have all penned in this piece are breathtakingly beautiful. I can smell the sweet smell of the flowers in bloom and visualize the birds, lambs, bees, frogs, butterflies and dragonflies as though I were actually taking a walk though this lovely scene you have all created.

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!

    A beautifully penned "Ode to Spring" ..... and a wonderful refreshing read.
    The imagery is simply magical .... the read delightful !
    Awesome job :Cindy, Kay, Frank, Rachel, Hellon & Jeannie !

    ~Applauds well deserved~
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a beautiful poem. A very good expression of spring. Great job by all of you.