Comments : Ode To Spring (Collab RTVW)

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    I loved this poem becoz it makes gives me a perfect image about nature... and very good written with the changing of the weather.// excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Well guys, you all did an outstanding job on this one!
    I loved the imagery and the peaceful feeling that flows from it:)

    (((super hugs for you all)))

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    Wow, a beautiful poem. A very good expression of spring. Great job by all of you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The words you have all penned in this piece are breathtakingly beautiful. I can smell the sweet smell of the flowers in bloom and visualize the birds, lambs, bees, frogs, butterflies and dragonflies as though I were actually taking a walk though this lovely scene you have all created.

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!

    A beautifully penned "Ode to Spring" ..... and a wonderful refreshing read.
    The imagery is simply magical .... the read delightful !
    Awesome job :Cindy, Kay, Frank, Rachel, Hellon & Jeannie !

    ~Applauds well deserved~
    Luanne

  • 16 years ago

    by Lu

    The flow within this poem is amazing ... as though the five of you dipped your pens in the same ink and colored this canvas with the same hearts .... truly amazing!
    ^^^
    Sorry I meant 6 ... my bad oops ... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    It was fun as the add a stanza club collabs always are. It is a joy to be surrounded with such wonderful and talented people. As Luanne would say, Woot Woot!

  • 16 years ago

    by C P Sharma

    I felt as if I was reading a poem from Wordsworth.