by StandStill Apr 5, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Slippery dreams falling constantly out of reach |
by CrossCut
This poem simply amazes me. The wording is incredible and everything seems so far fetched yet it makes complete sense at the same time. The last stanza was my absolute favorite though. I love the way you ended it. 5/5 |
Good.... i like this one ^^ |
by Mike Martin
Gabby.i love this poem.there's such a touch of everything that is you.....and i have a gentle, solid hand.......5/5......xoxoxo |
by Baby Rainbow
I think this poem is the best i have read of yours. i dont knwo what to say about it. its just... i dont know. :( so so well written and just .. each line brings a new tear. well done i really do like this one xxxx |
I hate how u right poems, that i hate what there about but love the actual poem! |